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Early Development of the Alien Script
Then the following week in Nouveau Tintin N° 19 another relevant episode. Here Captain Haddock , after walking off and finding himself stepping into a lake where a crocodile fights with a snake, he finds that he's suddenly shocked by something, and out comes the electric eel that's been inside Captain Haddock's jersey. Professor Calculus points out that these things can grow up to a couple of metres long and stun a horse with a single discharge.
Early Development of the Alien Script
a) Face-rape
Ron
Shusett had the idea of a man face-raped by an alien organism later
giving birth to an alien baby, and then Dan mulled over the whole idea,
he wondered about how the baby alien creature would come out, he had
thoughts about them coming out from various orifices and so on and soon
himself woke up in the middle of the night with a realisation of how it
should be.
He got up off the couch and went to Ron's bedroom and told
him his idea.
He said to Ron, "The monster bursts out of his stomach"
and he went on to explain that the alien not only lays its egg inside
the man, but grows inside and emerges as a baby, splattering flesh and
blood everywhere.
b) Reflecting Crohn's disease
The way he had it was having the creature burst out of the victim's
stomach rather than actually the chest,
seemed to reflect very much the stomach and bowel problems he suffered
from that would eventually be diagnosed as Crohns disease which would eventually
kill him in 2009. (See: Medical-inspiration)
c) Other inspirations
The actual idea though for a creature that burst out of a victim's body had been germinating in him for some time.
The initial concept came to him when he saw the "Seeds of Jupiter" story from issue No.8 of the comic book Weird Science originally published in 1951 and then Tim Boxell's comic book story "Defiled" from Death Rattle #1 (1972) which certainly help to shape the idea, and there would be experiences that he had with his own intestinal issues (See Medical Inspiration) that he was dealing with that made the idea of a what would be known as the Chestburster even more of a personal experience
Tim Boxell's "Defiled" from Death Rattle #1 (1972) |
d) Bringing it together
Dan
was now so sure that they had cracked it and had got what they
needed to write the whole movie, since no one had ever seen anything
like that on the screen and in three weeks they were able to write their
whole story.
Although Dan had talked briefly in the
past about how the alien chestburster came from his experience with
stomach problems, the details about how he arrived at the idea came to
the surface after soon he died.
The next part of the idea was what the Chestburster was going to do when it erupted
In one version of the early script (seen in Alexandre O Philippe's Memory: The Origins of Alien documentary (2019)) we see the words "But
when they go to get him, they find infirmary door hanging open. The
Autodoc is smashed, and Broussard is dead - a huge hole ripped out of
the middle of his chest, blood all over the room. They realise that
something was growing inside him, and now it's escaped"
Snippet from an early version of the Alien script in some form as seen in the documentary Memory: The Origins of Alien (2019) |
In
Paris, Dan O'Bannon would have been introduced to Hergé's Tintin.
Hergé's work was at the time at the core of the Bande Desinée culture
that O'Bannon was becoming initiated into during his work on Dune by the
likes of Alexandro Jodorowsky and Moebius who were both fans. That is
not to say that Dan should have been much a fan as some, but he should
have understood why it made sense to take serious note of it.
In Nouveau Tintin N°
18, published 13th January 1976, another episode of The Adventures of
Tintin and The Picaros that appeared relevant to the Alien script was
published.
After
visiting a Mayan step pyramid, and being forced off the road Tintin,
Captain Haddock and Professor Calculus encounter the drunken Arumbaya
tribe who invite them for a feast. The
adventurers find that the food is not to their liking because
Professor Calculus has put something in the food that would make alcohol
unpalatable The characters find the food too spicy and they
are disgusted by the wine that they're drinking, because Professor
Calculus had put a special pill in the food to make alcohol undrinkable. This
linked up with the scene in the Alien script where they discuss their
disgust with the food.
Then the following week in Nouveau Tintin N° 19 another relevant episode. Here Captain Haddock , after walking off and finding himself stepping into a lake where a crocodile fights with a snake, he finds that he's suddenly shocked by something, and out comes the electric eel that's been inside Captain Haddock's jersey. Professor Calculus points out that these things can grow up to a couple of metres long and stun a horse with a single discharge.
It's
as if he saw these two episodes and how they could connect with his
story, leaving a pyramid, the events at the meal with the tribes
resulting in discussion about the disgust of the food, and finally one
of the people suddenly has an extreme reaction to the wine because of a
special pill that makes alcohol taste disgusting, and his utterances
spelt out in letters look similar to Broussard's painful groan in Alien,
as he is about to chest burst.
Captain Haddock wandering around in near somnambulistic state having been hit on the head with a bottle a caught up with the crocodile's fight with the snake might reflect one of O'Bannon's Crohn's disease attacks as if that was happening inside his intestines if he had read that episode and thought "that's what I feel like sometimes inside" and then saw the following panels, "look at this little guy popping out, wow!", and so the electric eel that could grow to two metres and stun a horse with a single discharge which was interesting because he wanted his alien to grow to a roughly man sized creature. That would help to tie up some ideas that he had
One would say that this isn't what inspired the chest burster, but what helped the impression form for the purpose of the script, and perhaps put it in a meal scene.
Why
should Dan have this material in his hand? Perhaps either he saw it before
it was published in the magazine while he was in Paris and remembered it or someone such
as Moebius was sending him cuttings.
Dan wanted to show the event taking place, and forming an idea, he told Ron, "I'm going to have it
happen at dinner. while they're all sitting around, it's going to land
right in the middle of their food!"
Source quotes
- Pat Lowry: "He... he was explaining to me that, erm, he thought and thought and thought he written, virtually written Alien, but he couldn't think, he was saying, couldn't think really how to bring the alien into the picture, in other words, the John Hurt bit, erm, the, erm, alien bursting out of the body, he said, and he said " I was trying to think how I was going to do it", he said "I had thoughts of them coming out in various orifices and that sort of thing," he said, "and suddenly in the middle of the night, I woke up and thought, yes, I know how it's going to happen, that's how it's going to happen, " he said "and that's how it was" Yeah, so obviously it didn't start with that coming out and work the story around it, he worked the story out and that came afterwards, you know. (Pat Lowry worked as a Unit Driver for the Alien production and chauffering Ridley Scott' during Alien , interviewed in Vennis Lowe's documentary Alien Makers 5)
- Dan O'Bannon : As soon as I heard it, I thought, oh well, that, that's it. That was one of the ideas that made it possible to uhm, make this thing worth doing at all. This is a movie of alien interspecies rape, that's it, that's scary, that scaring because it hits all of our buttons, all of our unresolved feelings about sexuality, all of them. (Alien Evolution documentary 5:42)
- Ron Shusett: .... then I said well "Dan, what happens by this way, you'll have a human giving birth to an alien" and the first thought was that we'll operate on him and take him out and Dan said "No, No, what happens is that he doesn't have to operate, in the middle of the movie he comes bursting out of his chest", and we both looked at each other in mutual horror of what we created and right then we knew the whole script would be finished and it would be everything we wanted it to be, that among everything, a sort of collaboration between once I came up with impregnating and I said to Dan, "no one, you ask how he gets on board and nobody's seen a moment like that in science fiction history Dan, " we both held our mi... and that turned out to be the making of our careers that moment, in three months from that moment we had the script ready and it all lived up to that first twenty nine pages. (Ask Mr Kern show October 27th 2012 Part1 , 17mins in,. http://www.askmrkern.com, ) (see partial transcript from the Ask Mr Kern epsiode, relating to invention of the lifecycle)
- Jason Zinoman: O'Bannon mulled over the idea when he went to sleep and woke up in the middle of the night. He walked over to Shusett's bedroom and proposed what would become the most shattering horror scene since bewigged Norman Bates pulled open the shower curtains."The Monster "O'Bannon told his friend " bursts out of his stomach. ". (see Shock Value, Chapter 10 Stomaching It, p179 to 181)
- Jason Zinoman: O'Bannon
went on to explain that the alien not only lays its egg inside the man,
but grows inside and emerges as a baby, splattering flesh and blood
everywhere. The idea of an alien violently bursting out of a stomach was
of course very personal for O'Bannon, that's what his sickness felt
like. He could also see that this would be a potent metaphor for
childbirth. Increased access to birth control pills and the rise of
abortion as a political issue in the seventies made reproduction a source
of much paranoia.
(see Shock Value, Chapter 10 Stomaching It, p179 to 181) - Dan O'Bannon: That's the big moment, that's the kicker, it's layed its egg inside of our guy, and it comes out through the chest, I said "I'm going to have it happen at dinner. while they're all sitting around, it's going to land right in the middle of their food"(Alien Saga documentary.)
Updated "Alien: Birthing the chestburster" with information from Memory documentary and what I noticed in Hergé's "The Adventures of Tintin and The Picaros"
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